Sticky tape logo

   I am also thinking of re shooting both adverts as I want to change the logo to make it look better using sticky tape. This will depend on the views of people who I show the ruff cut to. I will use their feedback make my descion. 

Advert 2 changes

   Again in advert 2 which is my football advert I need to re shoot sum of my shots as they aren't still. Also I want to get another shot of the goalkeeper in order to show tension between the goal keeper and the penalty taker as they are in competition with each other. 

Change to advert 1

   I am planning to change my first advert which is the one advertising rugby. I had to use myself as the actor as the person I wanted wasn't there so I would like to re shoot the whole thing keeping mostly the same shots and I also want to add in a shot of the ball actually going through the posts. 

Brief update

   The weather has now died down and I am hoping to do my re shoots on sunday. My actors are all free and I am hoping the weather stays good. I have looked over my ruff cut with my teacher and there are sum changes that I need to make most of which involve holding the camera still or just adding in a shot to give more of an affect.

Overall

Both adverts need a better choice of music and also need better logos. Something as small as drawing on my logo with coloured pens rather than black to add a little more to it.

Advert 2 feedback

Good use of shot revers shot but more is still needed. I am going to use western style music to build up tension between the goaly and the player. The use of a gun as he shoots showing his dominance is also something I am thinking of doing to further dramatise the piece.

Advert 2 feedback